六、书面表达(20分)
以“My Eating Habits”为题,写一篇短文,介绍自己的饮食习惯。 内容包括: 一日三餐通常吃什么; 是否有健康的饮食习惯,说明理由; 今后在饮食习惯方面的改进计划。 要求: 语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯; 词数:80~100 词。 My Eating Habits __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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My Eating Habits
I have some specific eating habits in my daily life. For breakfast, I usually have a cup of milk, an egg and some bread. It gives me enough energy to start the day. At noon, I always have rice with different kinds of vegetables and a little meat. Vegetables are rich in vitamins and meat provides protein. For dinner, I often eat noodles or porridge. I think my eating habits are somewhat healthy. I eat a variety of foods, which can meet my body’s nutritional needs. However, I also realize there is room for improvement. I plan to eat more fruits in the future because they are full of nutrients. And I will reduce the amount of junk food like potato chips. I believe these changes will make my diet healthier and help me keep in good shape.
【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”; ③ 提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中自己的饮食习惯的介绍。包括一日三餐饮食、是否有健康的饮食习惯以及理由和今后在饮食习惯方面的改进计划。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤] 第一步,介绍一日三餐通常吃什么; 第二步,介绍自己是否有健康的饮食习惯,并说明理由; 第三步,介绍自己今后在饮食习惯方面的改进计划。
[亮点词汇] ① in my daily life在我的日常生活中 ② different kinds of不同种类的 ③ are rich in富有 ④ keep in good shape保持良好的身材和体型
[高分句型] ① I eat a variety of foods, which can meet my body’s nutritional needs. (定语从句) ② However, I also realize there is room for improvement. (宾语从句) ③ I plan to eat more fruits in the future because they are full of nutrients. (because引导原因状语从句)